Just need to add the keychain, but this pattern was awesome!

Fin came out a little less rounded because I was lazy and slip stitched the sides closed.

Everything going well; all stitch counts look correct and instructions are clear!

On row 12 (and row 13), it might be more clear/flow better to just embed the special instruction in the directions like it was done in the fin rows, so it would read something like: 24 sc, (sl st FLO, 2 ch st, dc in 2nd st from hook, sl st in beginning FL), 12 sc, (work a sc in the BL left exposed from the FLO fin), 1 sc. [18] You could also just move the instruction ahead of the stitch pattern. However, this is purely a preference and is fine/understandable how it is written.

The cues on placing the stitch markers for the eyes are great! My only suggestion is to perhaps include the instruction either before the row we place them or in the same instruction just so people can place them if they're counting their stitches while they work.