Love that you included a little color coded picture of the felt shapes we would need to complete the project! My suggestion would be to include at least 2 pics on this section - one showing a closeup of the face/ears and one of the bell, with the felt details attached so that people can reference the placement for the features without having to scroll.

All looks good in this section!

Collar complete. For step 2 maybe just add some clarifying language so it doesnt seem like 19 sc in total. For instance: sc in 2nd chain from the hook, sc 19 x more (20) OR sc in 2nd chain from the hook and the remaining chain stitches (20)

Ears section looks clear. For step 2 of this part you might just add 1 to the sc to make it less obscured by the other stitch instrucrions, so: (1 sc, inc) x 2, 1 sc (7)

Everything clear on the arms section. Would perhaps rephrase the final instructions to something like this, for added clarity: Do not stuff. Pinch the two sides together and sc through them. (You should be left with five sc.) FO and leave a long tail for sewing. Fold in half makes me think hot dog or hamburger fold instead of what I think you mean here. Including a photo would probably be a nice addition, too.

Head finished! Suggestion for all sections to have a photo at the end showing the completed element for people to easily reference. Also, instructions to stuff a little sooner would be helpful, perhaps after or before the first decrease?

Body is finished. Only note for this section is to maybe make the stuffing instructions start after the repeat of 36 rows or between them so easier to get stuffing evenly distributed. Like ”start stuffing and continue stuffing”

Things look good and clear so far! My only suggestions would be to add (make 2) to the description of the legs section and to include a photo of the ch3 leg join if possible. A photo of the legs at this point would be a bonus, too!

Starting tonight - sorry it took me so long!