Latest noteProgress 100% Date Nov 30, 2022 Project Darla Duck Mood 😊 Overall, I think you have created a nice, quick pattern that makes a super cute chunky duck! I just have a few suggestions that could maybe improve the pattern or make it more clear: On step 12 clarify the term inside loop means flo and indicate whether the flo instructions apply just to that first slip stitch or to the single crochets, as well. Identify whether the sl st is our first stitch (slst, invdec, sc, invdec...) or if we also sc into the sl st space (slst & sc, invdec, sc, invdec...). On step 14, double check if this is supposed to be inv dec x 4 (4 sts). Perhaps add a photo of the eye placement you made so people can replicate that look if they so desire or give a written description. (I placed my eyes x stitches apart on x row). On the final note, is the slip stitch in the last stitch from round 14 or are we using it more to fasten off? For the arms section, everything was clear, but you might add a photo to the end showing how you sewed it closed. Similarly, the feet section was easy to understand, but would be even more clear with a photo at the end. I would include a photo of the oval created for the beak/mouth, just so people can reference what the shape is supposed to look like. For the attachment section, I always think it is helpful to supply photos or describe the way the part was sewn onto the body, but that isn't necessary as this is considered an intermediate pattern. Thanks for letting me test this cutie! For ref, I used Bernat (Vanilla?) for the body with a 7mm hook. I used 3.25mm scrap milk cotton orange yarn for the beak and the feet, but I probably should have sized up or doubled up my yarn because mine were on the smaller side. Redid the mouth from my last entry and added her accesories, which I freestyled and explains their wonkiness!